Koru Art

Jeevanjot and Ranas summary

Lost Story

                                                            Lost story
                                 Goal=have some complex sentences.


Woah!! these toys are so cool,i’ll just go check them out.I was extremely excited, but first I had to ask my mum, hopefully she says yes. She said “yup you can go. I'll just go check my things out”.

Walking towards the toys, I was getting a bit worried that I would get lost. I looked back and she vanished in thin air.I started calling out “mum!” I didn't hear her,I called again “muum!” didn't  hear her again. I started thinking ‘what should I do’ ‘ding idea’. Why not look through some aisles?

 Looking in some aisles,soon I heard a call which said “Jeevanjot” I followed the voice and it led…...My Mum! and that's my lost story

                                                        Self assessment

I think I did well on my goal. I had some complex sentences but I think I still need to improve.

Foreshortening

Moment In Time

A Moment in Time by Jeevanjot

“It's so fun!”I said  While I was making my cool as car to watch the movie, which was Home Alone, I felt like I was going to stay here for a long time.

First I had to find the perfect size cardboard box because I needed to fit into the cardboard box and be comfortable inside of it. I heard people talking about each other's cool cars I liked Jaden Harmer because it looked like a limo I wish I could make one like that but in the end It didn't look like a Limo at all. I also made my Drink holder and my popcorn I just couldn't stop thinking of how yum the food would be I couldn't get it out of my head.

After that I started painting my drive in movie car. I painted it blue and a little bit of green it looked cool.once I finished I was puffing in relief but finally the time has come where the movie started!!

Summarising

Adding humour