Lost Story

                                                            Lost story
                                 Goal=have some complex sentences.


Woah!! these toys are so cool,i’ll just go check them out.I was extremely excited, but first I had to ask my mum, hopefully she says yes. She said “yup you can go. I'll just go check my things out”.

Walking towards the toys, I was getting a bit worried that I would get lost. I looked back and she vanished in thin air.I started calling out “mum!” I didn't hear her,I called again “muum!” didn't  hear her again. I started thinking ‘what should I do’ ‘ding idea’. Why not look through some aisles?

 Looking in some aisles,soon I heard a call which said “Jeevanjot” I followed the voice and it led…...My Mum! and that's my lost story

                                                        Self assessment

I think I did well on my goal. I had some complex sentences but I think I still need to improve.

Foreshortening

Moment In Time

A Moment in Time by Jeevanjot

“It's so fun!”I said  While I was making my cool as car to watch the movie, which was Home Alone, I felt like I was going to stay here for a long time.

First I had to find the perfect size cardboard box because I needed to fit into the cardboard box and be comfortable inside of it. I heard people talking about each other's cool cars I liked Jaden Harmer because it looked like a limo I wish I could make one like that but in the end It didn't look like a Limo at all. I also made my Drink holder and my popcorn I just couldn't stop thinking of how yum the food would be I couldn't get it out of my head.

After that I started painting my drive in movie car. I painted it blue and a little bit of green it looked cool.once I finished I was puffing in relief but finally the time has come where the movie started!!

Summarising

Adding humour

My thank letter

Dear Karen

Thank you for coming to Camp Omatua and helping us get things ready and bringing me to camp because I was doing day trips. Here are some of my highlights.

Learning more about Camp Omatua and exploring all the cool places at Camp Omatua. My other highlights were making new friends and playing Army Tag in the bamboo forest and other places. I also liked when we did our camp activities such as lost in the bush.You had to grab a bag that had a cellphone in it,but you could only use 2 really big sticks,tape and scissors.(It wasn't a real working phone) but it was really easy.

            Here’s my Acrostic poem for you.

Thanks for helping

Have a great day

A helper is needed such as you

Never bad

Kindness is in you

Super awesome

Kind and caring

Amazing and cool

Really helpful

Exciting and funny

Nice and neat

THANKS

Jeevanjot

5 things about me

I'm 80% Indian

My favorite game is Call Of Duty Black Ops 

My Favorite sport is Soccer














My favorite color is blue





I'm 9 years old