persuasive writing

The Learning Intention: I am learning to write Persuasively

The Success Criteria:How I can achieve this

1. State your opinion in the Introduction  and who is your audience
2. Give 3 detailed reasons to support your opinion. One reason per paragraph
3. Try to give facts or statistics to support your reasons.
4. Use emotive and persuasive language.
5. Go the progression on the writing wall to check where you are at with writing persuasively.
6. Assess what you are doing well. Reflect and action what your next step is.

                           A supermarket being built near Parkvale School

I think that we should absolutely say yes to a supermarket being built close to Parkvale school and the Council should as well. People have really wanted to build a supermarket because it is close to there house and to school.

Firstly your mum and dad won’t have to travel that far which will make the car that your dad uses use less fuel. So your dad won’t have to pay that much  money for fuel.

Secondly you can bring money to school and at lunch time go to the supermarket and buy lots of things to eat. then you won’t have eat all your lunch at lunch time.  

Thirdly if you have a supermarket close to a school if there is any sale a the supermarket and there is super cheap prices then you can get there really quickly so you don't miss out on the sale.

In my opinion I think it is fair that we have a supermarket be built close to Parkvale school but there are things that are bad about having a supermarket being built next to Parkvale school. Would you want to have a supermarket being built close to Parkvale school?