Monday, September 7, 2015

Friday, August 21, 2015

enviroschool word cloud

I focus on my Writing
I'm an expert in maths 
some people live close to a gully
Some people are very scruffy
some people are in the hastings community 


Friday, August 14, 2015

Room 11 artists

persuasive writing

The Learning Intention: I am learning to write Persuasively
The Success Criteria:How I can achieve this
  1. State your opinion in the Introduction  and who is your audience
  2. Give 3 detailed reasons to support your opinion. One reason per paragraph
  3. Try to give facts or statistics to support your reasons.
  4. Use emotive and persuasive language.
  5. Go the progression on the writing wall to check where you are at with writing persuasively.
  6. Assess what you are doing well. Reflect and action what your next step is.

                           A supermarket being built near Parkvale School

I think that we should absolutely say yes to a supermarket being built close to Parkvale school and the Council should as well. People have really wanted to build a supermarket because it is close to there house and to school.

Firstly your mum and dad won’t have to travel that far which will make the car that your dad uses use less fuel. So your dad won’t have to pay that much  money for fuel.

Secondly you can bring money to school and at lunch time go to the supermarket and buy lots of things to eat. then you won’t have eat all your lunch at lunch time.  

Thirdly if you have a supermarket close to a school if there is any sale a the supermarket and there is super cheap prices then you can get there really quickly so you don't miss out on the sale.

In my opinion I think it is fair that we have a supermarket be built close to Parkvale school but there are things that are bad about having a supermarket being built next to Parkvale school. Would you want to have a supermarket being built close to Parkvale school?









Monday, August 3, 2015

My word cloud


I live inland from the coast.
I went to the council to make a complaint.
The compactor crushes cars into triangular box.
Our environment is special to everyone.
I'm in the community







Friday, June 26, 2015

Kite making

Tuku Tuku
Thing you need                              
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Toe Toe
Rakoe


1.Rip string from flax by using your nail and rip the side of it because you need lots.

2.Take the Toe Toe and put in a A shape. First a triangle then a piece of flax on top…..

3.Then tie it altogether with flax string. Then put Rakoe on top.

4.Tie the Rakoe from the 2 sides and the middle

5.Done! You have your own TukuTuku maori kite you can use it for decorations or anything else.