Monday, May 16, 2016
Friday, May 6, 2016
Lost Story
Lost story
Goal=have some complex sentences.
Woah!! these toys are so cool,i’ll just go check them out.I was extremely excited, but first I had to ask my mum, hopefully she says yes. She said “yup you can go. I'll just go check my things out”.
Walking towards the toys, I was getting a bit worried that I would get lost. I looked back and she vanished in thin air.I started calling out “mum!” I didn't hear her,I called again “muum!” didn't hear her again. I started thinking ‘what should I do’ ‘ding idea’. Why not look through some aisles?
Looking in some aisles,soon I heard a call which said “Jeevanjot” I followed the voice and it led…...My Mum! and that's my lost story
Self assessment
I think I did well on my goal. I had some complex sentences but I think I still need to improve.
Goal=have some complex sentences.
Woah!! these toys are so cool,i’ll just go check them out.I was extremely excited, but first I had to ask my mum, hopefully she says yes. She said “yup you can go. I'll just go check my things out”.
Walking towards the toys, I was getting a bit worried that I would get lost. I looked back and she vanished in thin air.I started calling out “mum!” I didn't hear her,I called again “muum!” didn't hear her again. I started thinking ‘what should I do’ ‘ding idea’. Why not look through some aisles?
Looking in some aisles,soon I heard a call which said “Jeevanjot” I followed the voice and it led…...My Mum! and that's my lost story
Self assessment
I think I did well on my goal. I had some complex sentences but I think I still need to improve.
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